Tuesday, October 29, 2013

老徐雅思: 2013年9月28日雅思写作范文

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2013年9月28日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101c54f.html
Oct 29th 2013, 10:36

题目:Some people think they have right to use as much fresh
water as they want,others,otherwise
believes governments should strictly control the use of fresh water
as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.


解析:

9月初考完nuclear power,9月底又考water
resource,这个月和环境问题干上了!环境问题一直是我在课堂上重点强调的话题。最近这一年似乎并不热门,终于在9月份爆发了。


关于保护水资源,大部分同学认为比使用核能要容易写,因为比较贴近生活。拿到题目之后请不要兴奋,请保持淡定,仔细审题,不要急急忙忙把背过的素材堆积到答卷纸上。这个题目提醒大家高度注意,讨论中需要涉及government
VS.
individual。有些同学可能写了一大堆水资源被污染和水资源短缺,估计都是事先背过的词汇和素材。但是请不要忽视了题目论证的焦点,政府为什么要控制用水,怎么控制,为什么有人反对控制?这些都是扣题的关键。如果写偏了的话,可能你又落入5.5分的宿命了。


写文章最重要的不是拼词汇和句子难度,而是把意思讲清楚,接下来看看老徐如何discuss both views的吧。







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Saturday, October 26, 2013

老徐雅思: 2013年9月21日雅思写作范文

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2013年9月21日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101c39h.html
Oct 26th 2013, 15:15

题目:Throughout the history people have dreamed of living in
a perfect society, but people have not agreed on what a perfect
society would be like.
What do you think is the most important element for
building a perfect society?
How can people achieve this goal?

解析:


还能有比这更坑爹的题目吗?什么是建设和谐社会的最重要的因素?而且只能写一个因素,然后再根据这个因素写一写怎样建设和谐社会。这样的题目为什么不拿去做某省高考语文作文题呢?



要用英语来阐述这么一个抽象的话题,对于那些平时背模板背范文的同学来说,估计只能拼命咬那支世界上最贵的铅笔了。而那些跟随老徐一起练写作真功夫的同学,应该不会太为难吧。且看下面这篇范文是如何破解此题的。



我的关键词是equality,为什么和谐社会的最重要因素写这个呢?因为"平等"这个词范围很广啊,包括了教育的平等、找工作的平等、政府为穷学生交学费、政府反腐败等等内容。这样一来,可以写的东西就多起来了。你是不是恍然大悟了,原来仍然是用我们平时写过的常规素材来写这种奇葩题目。跟老徐雅思学写作,你会明白写作是怎么玩转的。





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Monday, October 14, 2013

老徐雅思: 2013年9月12日雅思写作范文

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2013年9月12日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101buln.html
Oct 14th 2013, 07:41

题目:Countries with a long average working time are more
economically successful than those countries which do not have a
long working time. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?

解析:

最近几天一直在写前三个月的范文,感觉7/8/9这三个月的考题真的是险阻重重,有些题目看似平淡无奇,实则不好下笔。今天这个题目就是如此,国家发展的题目我们讲过写过,工作类话题我们也讲过写过,但是这两者搭在一起,论证其中的关系,其实是很有难度的一个题目。老徐为什么把每次的题目都写一遍,因为唯有亲自动笔,方能体会其中的门道,才能给你最贴心实用的写作指导。


如果你要问什么是难题,什么是容易题,我可以给你一个大概的说明。凡是那些考查简单语言技巧的、本身素材很丰富的题就很容易;而那些考观察力、说理性强的题目就比较难写。凡是那些雅思考试多次出现的常规题比较容易;而那些出其不意的新题就比较难。不过话说回来,再难的题目,在"老徐雅思"的范文里面都变得容易了


今天这个题目,经济和工作时间的关系问题,我采用了比较少见的一边倒的方式,虽然中间也用到了一定的让步。我感觉工作时间短的国家的经济也许更发达一些。首先,经济主要由科技水平决定,发达国家的人们其实工作没那么累,不发达国家的人反而工作得比较苦逼。我认识的一些正规的国际机构的员工,每年带薪能休好几个礼拜,再看看咱们。。。其次,经济发达以后,休假时间反而多了,比如中国,20年前的周末是只有一天的。那些90后的烤鸭们,你们是否觉得每周休息两天是与生俱来的?最后一条,工作时间短了,休闲多了,工作压力会减少,效率会增加,所以工作时间减少有时候反而能促进经济发展。也许有一天,当我们的经济足够发达了,我们也能像那些老外一样,每年20多天的带薪休假。。。





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Saturday, October 12, 2013

老徐雅思: 2013年9月7日雅思写作范文

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2013年9月7日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101btkd.html
Oct 12th 2013, 13:52

题目:Nuclear energy is better than other sources of energy
to meet the increasing need. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?

解析:



这应该是雅思考试第一次考核能的话题,但上过课的同学对于这个题目的素材应该不会太为难,因为我在环保类话题当中提到过这些新能源,也总结过相关的一些词汇。它的好处是缓解能源短缺和能源危机的问题,并且不会造成排放carbon
emission,不污染空气和环境。至于核能的弊端,大家可能觉得核能是一种危险的能源,有人甚至谈核色变。日本的核泄漏事故至今仍然灾害不断,这就是一个很好的例子。所以说,核能不能算是最好的能源,人类还需要进一步开发和寻找更清洁和更安全的能源。












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老徐雅思: 2013年10/11/12月雅思写作预测

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2013年10/11/12月雅思写作预测
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101btif.html
Oct 12th 2013, 12:22


从7、8、9三个月的考题来看,偏题和抽象题目不断涌现,略举几例:太空旅游、和谐社会、从众心理、人工智能等等,还有一些旧题目重新拿来考,也不是特别好写的题目,比如是否应该拆除老建筑,现代人是变得更相互依存还是更独立等等。希望今年最后三个月能够多考一些常规题。当然,即使是偏题怪题,其实也都可以用常规题的素材来写。这一点大家从我的范文中应该可以看出来。


下面这个题库是给那些真正想做练习的同学准备的,基本还是那些经常考的话题类别。每一类题目都练一练,考试的时候将各种素材进行组装即可。

1. Memorization of information by frequent repetition (rote
learning) plays a role in many education systems. Do the advantages
outweigh the
disadvantages? (教育)

2. Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic
subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects
such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
(教育)

3. Some people think that children should obey the rules that
parents and teachers want them to do. Others think that less
control will help children deal with adult life. Discuss both these
views and give your own
opinion. (教育)

4. Many people argue that in order to improve educational
quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or
even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss
of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and
give your own
opinion. (教育)

5. Some people tend to take temporary jobs, for they have time
to do other things. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
(工作)

6. Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries,
but it does not solve the poverty, so rich countries should give
other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial
aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

(国际援助)

7. Some people say that the government should change people's
lifestyle, while others believe individuals should have their own
choice. Discuss both these views and give your
opinion.
(社会生活)

8. In the past few decades, the size of cities has grown
enormously. Discuss the causes and consequences of the rapid
expansion of cities. (城市发展)

9. The only way to improve the safety in our roads is to give
much stricter punishment for driving offences. To what extent do
you agree or disagree?(交通)

10. In many parts of the world, the incidence of crimes for
young people is increasing. Why is this case happening? How should
children or teenagers be punished?
(青少年犯罪)

10. Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more
than local people when they visit the cultural and historical
attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree or
disagree? (旅游)

11. Some people say that the increasing business and cultural
contact between countries has positive effects. Others say it would
lead to the loss of national identities. Discuss both views and
give your own opinion.
(全球化与文化)

12. We are surrounded by all kinds of advertising, which is
having an increasing influence on our lives. Do the positive
effects of advertising outweigh its negative
effects? (广告)

13. Some people think that good health is the basic need of
every person and it is not right for the medical care services to
be run by profit-making companies. Do the disadvantages of private
health care outweigh its
advantages? (政府 vs. 私营)

14. Some people think that men and women have different
qualities and some jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are
suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(男女差异)

15. Some people believe that news media is becoming more and
more influential in people's lives and that it is a negative
development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(媒体)

16. Leisure is a growing industry. People no longer entertain
themselves as they used to because the use of modern technology has
made them less creative. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
(科技与生活)

17. Some people believe that a range of technology available has
increased the gap between rich people and poor people. To what
extent do you agree or
disagree? (科技与社会)

18. Developments in science and technology have caused
environmental problems. Some people say that a simpler way of life
will protect the environment, while others believe that science and
technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and
give your opinion. (科技与环境)

19. There is a general increase of anti-social behavior and a
lack of respect to others. What do you think are the causes of
this? What solutions can you
suggest?
(行为品德)

20. Public museums and art galleries are not needed because
people can see historical objects and works by using computers. To
what extent do you agree or disagree? (网络博物馆)
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Friday, October 11, 2013

老徐雅思: 2013年8月29日雅思写作范文

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2013年8月29日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101bt9c.html
Oct 12th 2013, 06:09

题目:Some scientists think it is very soon that computers
will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a
positive development, while others think it is a negative
development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.


解析:


又是一个颇有挑战性的题目,虽然属于科技类,虽然有大家最熟悉的computer,但这个题目的本质是写人工智能,artificial
intelligence。如果要说类似题目的话,2011年1月8号考的那个机器人的利弊的题目和它相似度挺高的。


写这种题目可以多来点例子,不然就显得比较空洞了。估计有不少同学看过那些科幻片里机器人带来的灾难,所以大家比较容易想到这个事情的弊端,机器人暴动的话很容易失控的。除了这个点之外,我们也可以写写课堂上讲过的机器的话题,比如机器可以提高工作效率,把工人解放出来。但机器使用过多也容易使人养成依赖性等等。


今年的科技类话题考了5次左右,大家需要继续关注。








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老徐雅思: 2013年8月24日雅思写作范文

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2013年8月24日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101bsw2.html
Oct 11th 2013, 16:19

题目:Some people think that in this modern world people are
getting dependent on each other, while others think the modern
society gets people more independent on each other. Discuss both
views and give your own opinion.


解析:


坑爹题目年年有,今年似乎特别多。虽然这个题目曾经在08年7月24号考过,但是估计还是让很多同学没有防备。这种题比较抽象,而且是两个完全相反的方面。应对的办法就是从不同的角度去写,然后举一些例子。比如,现代社会劳动分工更加细化,所以生产和消费都需要依赖别人的劳动。在工作当中大家需要很多合作,所以变得更加依赖彼此。另一方面,人们也变得越来越独立,刚好上周考了一次关于家庭变小的话题,可以用来作为大家追求独立生活的一个例子。此外还有我们写的非常多的科技类话题,网络发达导致了各种"宅",也可以佐证一下当代人的独立个性。


如此看来,还是我说的那个方法,用各种常规话题和常规素材,解决各种不靠谱的题目。








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老徐雅思: 2013年8月17日雅思写作范文

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2013年8月17日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101bssh.html
Oct 11th 2013, 11:55

题目:In some countries governments pay the money for
students' university fees,while in other countries,
students pay for themselves. Do advantages of governments paying
for the students outweigh its
disadvantages?

解析:


在上一篇博文中我曾经说过,雅思考试的题库就在那里,"老徐雅思"博客这两年的范文库,基本可以把它们全部搞定。今天这个题目又是一个很好的例证。去年9月6号的雅思考题,关于政府是否需要帮学生交学费的问题。可以直接把它拿过来解决今天这个考题。http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b1501013in2.html



到今年9月1号,"老徐雅思"的范文写了整整两年,将近100篇了。再写两年范文的话,以后任何一次雅思考试之后,我都只需要发个链接给你,你就能直接从这个范文库里面找到考试的破解方法了。我的置顶帖里面有详细的范文分类,从这里面你也可以看到这两年来雅思写作考试的路线图。包括各类话题的比重和出题时间。更重要的是,这些原创范文都是"老徐雅思"的style,用词句型和素材都很平实,适合模仿学习,能够满足学渣学霸等各个阶层烤鸭的需求。这些文章已经帮很多同学的写作上6上7,开始了海外校园的新生活。
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老徐雅思: 2013年8月3日雅思写作范文

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2013年8月3日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101bsrz.html
Oct 11th 2013, 11:26

题目:In many countries today, people in big cities prefer to
live alone or in small family units rather than large and extended
family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

解析:

这个题目在今年4月13号曾经考过,几乎是一样的题,但是提问方式不一样。4月13号的问题是原因和利弊?而今天这个题目只是写利弊。大家可以参考4月13号的范文,直接把那个题目搬过来。http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b15010183zm.html 当然了,直接搬不是照抄,你也得讲点搬运技巧


老徐为大家演示一下。比如,4月13号的考题,请问为什么家庭变小了?你回答,因为人们生活水平提高了,收入增加了,更加追求独立性和私人空间,所以家庭变小了。而今天这个题目你可以这么写:家庭变小反映了人们生活水平提高了,收入增加了,家庭变小之后,大家能够享有更多的独立性和私人空间,所以家庭变小是一个positive
trend。词还是那些词,素材还是那些素材,你只需要稍微调整一下就解决了。



从4月13号到8月3号,隔了不到4个月,算是本年度最快的一次完全意义的旧题重现。这样的故事,每年都在上演。雅思考试的题库就在那里,"老徐雅思"博客这两年的范文库,基本可以把它们全部搞定。
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Wednesday, October 9, 2013

老徐雅思: 2013年7月27日雅思写作范文

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2013年7月27日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101br62.html
Oct 9th 2013, 07:28

题目:The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the
world costs numerous governments' expenditures. This money should
be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?

解析:

建筑类的话题今年第二次出现,上一次是在3月14号,关于建筑的外观和功能。http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b1501017b8f.html 这种题属于雅思考题中的常规话题,但也是偏难的题目。可以结合城市发展的话题和传统文化保护的话题来写。大家的难点可能在于建筑方面的一些词汇,我在上一篇3月14号的范文中写了很多。大家把这两篇范文结合起来看,基本上这一类词汇就掌握得差不多了。包括architecture,high-rise,modern
building,construct,demolish,dismantle等等。


这篇范文刚好300词,大量地使用了动词的分词形式,大家可以学着使用。所谓语法多样性,就是把主动被动、各种从句、还有分词不定式等等各种语法手段都用上。





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Thursday, October 3, 2013

老徐雅思: 2013年7月18日雅思写作范文

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2013年7月18日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101bnnd.html
Oct 3rd 2013, 12:02

题目:In modern societies, it is possible for people to go
shopping, work and communicate via the internet without
face-to-face communication. Is it a positive or negative
development?


解析:



网络交流的利弊,这样的话题应该是任何培训课里的常规内容,基本就是一个普通的写作课的练习题了。碰到这样的题目,大家应该都挺开心的。


那么考试成绩又会怎样呢?


如果你考到分,说明你运气不错,遇到了比较好写的题目,当然你的实力也很好。如果你考到分,应该属于正常发挥,通常写作课都会讲类似的题目,辅导书上也有类似的题目。如果遇到这样的题目你还是分,那就还先花点时间提高英语基础吧,五花八门的雅思培训班或者考前预测可能目前都帮不到你,别浪费钱了。那如果你又考到了5.5呢,啥也别说了,继续努力吧








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