老徐雅思
2013年12月14日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101eab9.html
Feb 21st 2014, 16:16
题目：Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas
to study or work in the cities. What do you think are the reasons?
Do advantages of this development outweigh its
disadvantages?
解析：
很长时间没有写范文了，从今天开始把这段时间落下的文章全部都补上。"老徐雅思"的范文已经写了两年多，有100多篇了，最近在做一些整理工作。我会把其中的一些实用的词汇、句式和论据素材进行归纳整理，编成练习题目，给同学们提供更多实用的写作练习。其实很多同学在复习阶段并不具备写一整篇文章的能力，即使他们强迫自己写，写出来的文章质量也很差，而且把自己弄得很累。如果能把雅思题目进行话题分类，然后再分解成练习题，比如词汇、句型、段落的专项练习，那么一定能帮助大家循序渐进地掌握写作技巧，直到最后写出整篇的高分文章。
不少同学在微博里询问最新的范文，估计这两周能全部写上。今天写的这个是去年12月14号的题目，算是常规话题，关于人口从农村向城市的迁徙。大家比较容易想到的是一些大城市普遍存在的问题，这些问题只需要看看北京就知道了。不过提醒大家，既然这个题目强调的是年轻人从农村到城市，那么论证的重点应该紧扣年轻人，包括年轻人对城市的贡献，年轻人离开农村老家对于家庭的影响，当然也有大家熟悉的对于城市资源和交通的压力。
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Friday, December 13, 2013
老徐雅思: 2013年12月12日雅思写作范文
老徐雅思
2013年12月12日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101d3mk.html
Dec 13th 2013, 13:26
题目：In many countries people can buy a wide range of
household goods (for example, TV, microwave ovens, and rice
cookers）. Is it a positive or negative
development?
解析：
关于消费的话题，和经济、生活、环境相关。与此题高度相关联的近期题目包括2012年12月6号，"浪费型社会的原因和后果"，2013年6月8号，"政府鼓励公众消费"。其他一些题目比如购买名牌产品、保护环境等话题里面的素材也可以用到今天这个题目中。
家用电器的最大好处就是带来了方便和舒适，可以用具体的例子来说明，比如题目中给出的电视、微波炉等等。此外，购买消费品还能带来制造业的繁荣（见2013年6月8号题目），增加税收和创造就业。
弊端主要还是环境方面的，包括耗电、耗费原材料，这些大家应该都是轻车熟路的词汇。最后还一个就是对于人们的观念的影响，比如年轻人会变得浪费，比如很多人不断换手机，在物质生活上攀比。其实这样写起来就可以把刚刚考过的11月30号的买名牌产品的题目写过来了。
如果你考前把各类常规话题的素材都看一看，练一练，通常是可以应付各种新题目的。
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2013年12月12日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101d3mk.html
Dec 13th 2013, 13:26
题目：In many countries people can buy a wide range of
household goods (for example, TV, microwave ovens, and rice
cookers）. Is it a positive or negative
development?
解析：
关于消费的话题，和经济、生活、环境相关。与此题高度相关联的近期题目包括2012年12月6号，"浪费型社会的原因和后果"，2013年6月8号，"政府鼓励公众消费"。其他一些题目比如购买名牌产品、保护环境等话题里面的素材也可以用到今天这个题目中。
家用电器的最大好处就是带来了方便和舒适，可以用具体的例子来说明，比如题目中给出的电视、微波炉等等。此外，购买消费品还能带来制造业的繁荣（见2013年6月8号题目），增加税收和创造就业。
弊端主要还是环境方面的，包括耗电、耗费原材料，这些大家应该都是轻车熟路的词汇。最后还一个就是对于人们的观念的影响，比如年轻人会变得浪费，比如很多人不断换手机，在物质生活上攀比。其实这样写起来就可以把刚刚考过的11月30号的买名牌产品的题目写过来了。
如果你考前把各类常规话题的素材都看一看，练一练，通常是可以应付各种新题目的。
青春就应该这样绽放 游戏测试：三国时期谁是你最好的兄弟！！ 你不得不信的星座秘密
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Sunday, December 8, 2013
老徐雅思: 2013年12月7日雅思写作范文
老徐雅思
2013年12月7日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101d002.html
Dec 8th 2013, 11:36
题目：Responsible tourists could preserve both the local
culture and environment. Some people think it is impossible to be a
responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
解析：
旅游的题目年年有，却每年都能玩出新花样。今天这个题目可以说是挖了个坑，等着那些不动脑筋的同学往里面跳。往年考旅游话题，一般都考国际旅游，导致误解和偏见，或者旅游对环境的破坏。而今天这个题目是从游客的角度来出发，请你谈一谈是否有可能做文明游客。如果你把背的素材直接往上写，很可能会因为跑题而丢分。
如果你想把之前准备的词汇和素材用上，你需要开动脑筋，建立起合理的逻辑。你分析一下，这个题是agree还是disagree比较好写？我觉得agree比较好写，这样就可以把你以前写的那些文化差异、破坏环境的词汇都用上了。当然文章的结果还是应该回到一个积极的立场：虽然游客难免会破坏环境，会破坏当地文化，但是我们应该采取措施，帮助游客避免misbehavior。
从目前的雅思出题趋势来看，似乎题目越来越灵活，出题角度越来越刁钻。只有真正学着写文章，把文章写得扣题，你才有可能告别写作5.5的宿命，步入分甚至分时代。
青春就应该这样绽放 游戏测试：三国时期谁是你最好的兄弟！！ 你不得不信的星座秘密
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2013年12月7日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101d002.html
Dec 8th 2013, 11:36
题目：Responsible tourists could preserve both the local
culture and environment. Some people think it is impossible to be a
responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
解析：
旅游的题目年年有，却每年都能玩出新花样。今天这个题目可以说是挖了个坑，等着那些不动脑筋的同学往里面跳。往年考旅游话题，一般都考国际旅游，导致误解和偏见，或者旅游对环境的破坏。而今天这个题目是从游客的角度来出发，请你谈一谈是否有可能做文明游客。如果你把背的素材直接往上写，很可能会因为跑题而丢分。
如果你想把之前准备的词汇和素材用上，你需要开动脑筋，建立起合理的逻辑。你分析一下，这个题是agree还是disagree比较好写？我觉得agree比较好写，这样就可以把你以前写的那些文化差异、破坏环境的词汇都用上了。当然文章的结果还是应该回到一个积极的立场：虽然游客难免会破坏环境，会破坏当地文化，但是我们应该采取措施，帮助游客避免misbehavior。
从目前的雅思出题趋势来看，似乎题目越来越灵活，出题角度越来越刁钻。只有真正学着写文章，把文章写得扣题，你才有可能告别写作5.5的宿命，步入分甚至分时代。
青春就应该这样绽放 游戏测试：三国时期谁是你最好的兄弟！！ 你不得不信的星座秘密
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Sunday, December 1, 2013
老徐雅思: 2013年11月30日雅思写作范文
老徐雅思
2013年11月30日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101cu87.html
Dec 1st 2013, 12:57
题目：More and more people want to buy famous brands of
clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think
it is a positive or negative development?
解析：
我们先来看一看类似题目的路线图：2012年10月27号，广告使消费者变得失去个性；2013年7月13号，消费者的从众心理；2013年11月30号，追逐名牌的原因和利弊。从这三个时间来看，你觉得雅思考试的规律是什么？你应该怎么去准备考试，聪明的你，明白了么？
关于使用名牌的原因，可以使用广告话题的素材，因为消费者缺乏专业知识，所以相信品牌。因为名牌产品的广告往往设计得很诱人，所以刺激了名牌的消费。还一个就是人性的虚荣，有钱人越来越多，希望用名牌来显示身份；没钱人其实也越来越多，他们希望用名牌来掩饰自己没钱。当然，范文里的英语写得很简单symbol，social
status，cannot afford，follow the trend，这些都是常规词汇吧。
至于好处弊端，我觉得还是弊端更好写，可以写物质上攀比（compete）对孩子成长不好，还有就是个人会失去个性，集体会失去文化身份，比如追求外国品牌等等。
今年还剩最后一个月的考试，那些希望2013与雅思分手的童鞋，加油啦
青春就应该这样绽放 游戏测试：三国时期谁是你最好的兄弟！！ 你不得不信的星座秘密
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2013年11月30日雅思写作范文
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_657b1b150101cu87.html
Dec 1st 2013, 12:57
题目：More and more people want to buy famous brands of
clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think
it is a positive or negative development?
解析：
我们先来看一看类似题目的路线图：2012年10月27号，广告使消费者变得失去个性；2013年7月13号，消费者的从众心理；2013年11月30号，追逐名牌的原因和利弊。从这三个时间来看，你觉得雅思考试的规律是什么？你应该怎么去准备考试，聪明的你，明白了么？
关于使用名牌的原因，可以使用广告话题的素材，因为消费者缺乏专业知识，所以相信品牌。因为名牌产品的广告往往设计得很诱人，所以刺激了名牌的消费。还一个就是人性的虚荣，有钱人越来越多，希望用名牌来显示身份；没钱人其实也越来越多，他们希望用名牌来掩饰自己没钱。当然，范文里的英语写得很简单symbol，social
status，cannot afford，follow the trend，这些都是常规词汇吧。
至于好处弊端，我觉得还是弊端更好写，可以写物质上攀比（compete）对孩子成长不好，还有就是个人会失去个性，集体会失去文化身份，比如追求外国品牌等等。
今年还剩最后一个月的考试，那些希望2013与雅思分手的童鞋，加油啦
青春就应该这样绽放 游戏测试：三国时期谁是你最好的兄弟！！ 你不得不信的星座秘密
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Wednesday, November 27, 2013
雅思王--王陆（北京环球）: 大家请给这篇作文评分
雅思王--王陆（北京环球）
大家请给这篇作文评分
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_4ae7ca990102e64a.html
Nov 27th 2013, 15:11
A phenomenon which is ubiquitously seen is that many
attractions require costly entrance fees and build up numerous
souvenir shops. Some people argue that commercial management of
tourist attractions damage the culture of these memorable places,
while others allegthat only by using these scenic spots to make
more money can we protect these traditions.
Indeed, we have to admit that traditional culture has been
influenced by tourism, which has an aim of acquiring more economic
benefit. Commercial changing of traditional culture, leading to a
severedestruction. Tourism, which have a final aiming of
development of economics, makes culture changing into a tool for
earning money. For instance, some feasts or celebrations used to
hold only duringthe corresponding festival, whilst nowadays, in
order to fulfill the requirements of travelers and enhance their
attraction, locals preform nearly every day. This actions go back
on traditional culture,andculture has been commercialized.
Meanwhile, those people who originally come to get touch with the
traditional manners and customs purely, are often end with buying a
lot of souvenirs, abandoning their original aim. Furthermore, the
overdevelopment of tourist industry will lead to the invasion of
some foreign culture, consequently, have an impact on the local
costume. Generally, areas, which have several national historic
site, are always in some developing countries, with relatively
out-date economics, education, etc. When travelers who come from
some modern city show superiority complex unintentionally during
the visit, locals may feel their culture has a low level as others,
then lose heart to their traditional culture, hindering culture
heritage.In addition, too many people living in fragile
environments have lost control over their economies, their culture
and their environment when tourist has penetrated their homeland.
These can account for why excessive tourism do harm to local
culture.
The view that develop the tourism industry is the only way to
protect our costume also does makesense. First of all, obviously,
considering about other methods, such as education and publicity,
tourism is the most directly way to enhance people's consciousness
of culture preservation. Individuals will not realize the value of
their precious civilization until the culture makes a profit for
them, therefore they spend efforts to preserve their culture, which
is a fountainof the treasure. Many disappeared traditional cultures
are the result of locals' ignorance of the value. They have not
been motivated to protect and inherit their cultural. Just because
of this, some authorities of lots of ethnic cultures which is
confronting disappearance begin advocating the development of
tourism industry. Only in this way can we keep cultural diversity.
Secondly, it is undoubtedly that money is the prerequisite of the
protection of our culture and tradition. A lot of places of
historic interest collapse just because of inadequate supporting
finance to maintenance continuously. At the same time, as what has
been mentioned, cities with rich culture resources and long
histories are relatively poor, only when they earn adequate tax
income can these historical attractions be protected and inherited.
To be certain, developing tourism is the only way to make money,
and that is why tourism is a decisive element to inherit
traditional culture.
From what has been discussed above, although tourism
has made some social influence, it is a must in preservation, which
is a relatively effective and direct method. Without doubt, as long
as we can plan reasonably and refuse to pursue economic interests
blindly, culture can be well protected. Ideally, we should try our
best to protect traditional culture via a comprehensive way which
is assisted with education and media publicity.
嘿嘿，大家觉得怎么样，很多同学作文写的都差不多这样，是吧。。。
青春就应该这样绽放 游戏测试：三国时期谁是你最好的兄弟！！ 你不得不信的星座秘密
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http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_4ae7ca990102e64a.html
Nov 27th 2013, 15:11
A phenomenon which is ubiquitously seen is that many
attractions require costly entrance fees and build up numerous
souvenir shops. Some people argue that commercial management of
tourist attractions damage the culture of these memorable places,
while others allegthat only by using these scenic spots to make
more money can we protect these traditions.
Indeed, we have to admit that traditional culture has been
influenced by tourism, which has an aim of acquiring more economic
benefit. Commercial changing of traditional culture, leading to a
severedestruction. Tourism, which have a final aiming of
development of economics, makes culture changing into a tool for
earning money. For instance, some feasts or celebrations used to
hold only duringthe corresponding festival, whilst nowadays, in
order to fulfill the requirements of travelers and enhance their
attraction, locals preform nearly every day. This actions go back
on traditional culture,andculture has been commercialized.
Meanwhile, those people who originally come to get touch with the
traditional manners and customs purely, are often end with buying a
lot of souvenirs, abandoning their original aim. Furthermore, the
overdevelopment of tourist industry will lead to the invasion of
some foreign culture, consequently, have an impact on the local
costume. Generally, areas, which have several national historic
site, are always in some developing countries, with relatively
out-date economics, education, etc. When travelers who come from
some modern city show superiority complex unintentionally during
the visit, locals may feel their culture has a low level as others,
then lose heart to their traditional culture, hindering culture
heritage.In addition, too many people living in fragile
environments have lost control over their economies, their culture
and their environment when tourist has penetrated their homeland.
These can account for why excessive tourism do harm to local
culture.
The view that develop the tourism industry is the only way to
protect our costume also does makesense. First of all, obviously,
considering about other methods, such as education and publicity,
tourism is the most directly way to enhance people's consciousness
of culture preservation. Individuals will not realize the value of
their precious civilization until the culture makes a profit for
them, therefore they spend efforts to preserve their culture, which
is a fountainof the treasure. Many disappeared traditional cultures
are the result of locals' ignorance of the value. They have not
been motivated to protect and inherit their cultural. Just because
of this, some authorities of lots of ethnic cultures which is
confronting disappearance begin advocating the development of
tourism industry. Only in this way can we keep cultural diversity.
Secondly, it is undoubtedly that money is the prerequisite of the
protection of our culture and tradition. A lot of places of
historic interest collapse just because of inadequate supporting
finance to maintenance continuously. At the same time, as what has
been mentioned, cities with rich culture resources and long
histories are relatively poor, only when they earn adequate tax
income can these historical attractions be protected and inherited.
To be certain, developing tourism is the only way to make money,
and that is why tourism is a decisive element to inherit
traditional culture.
From what has been discussed above, although tourism
has made some social influence, it is a must in preservation, which
is a relatively effective and direct method. Without doubt, as long
as we can plan reasonably and refuse to pursue economic interests
blindly, culture can be well protected. Ideally, we should try our
best to protect traditional culture via a comprehensive way which
is assisted with education and media publicity.
嘿嘿，大家觉得怎么样，很多同学作文写的都差不多这样，是吧。。。
青春就应该这样绽放 游戏测试：三国时期谁是你最好的兄弟！！ 你不得不信的星座秘密
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